The bud is yet to unfold
Let her attain the puberty
And add her eternal beauty
to the humanity.
The bud is yet to unbolt
Let her pep up our surroundings
for us
by spreading her fragrance
in all the directions.
The bud is yet to unlock
Let her petals take shower at
every new bracing morning
with the untouched dew drops.
The bud is yet to unveil
Let her add some zest in air
by adding her stunning colors
and revitalize the aura.
The bud is yet to unfurl
Let us lend our hand to her
and facilitate
to accomplish her mission.
22 comments:
Beautiful Poem. :)
Very Very Beautiful :)
Lovely poem ..
I like how it can be interpreted in several ways :)) (Or at least I read it two different ways.)
Wonderful poem :-)
You are very creative with words !!
My compliments ....
(@^.^@)
..Excellnt..beautiful....poetry..resembles to a beautiful girl yet to come to this world....
Your poem... it tells all of spring!
@ Arpit - Thanks :)
@ Tarun - beauty lies in the eys on beholder
@ vivek - thanks :)
@ leone - ya thats my lil effort :)
@ Anya - thaks a lot :)
@ harman - u caught the right message :)
@ Lucy and Dick show - yeah...thanks :)
@ ayu - even i m also very much fond of roses .. and thanks u like it :)
If I am not wrong, the use of flowers is actually a substitute to the use of a girl child. Tell me if I am wrong. It has all the indications that that is so. :-)
I cannot imagine what would happen to this world without women. A simple answer is that there would be no life.
I think the usage of aroma is inappropriate. Aroma is a word "generally" associated with food. I think you meant to say "fragrance".
That apart, this is a "LOVELY" poem. A very delightful and heart-warming poem.
@ Vittal u r right...
will replace Aroma with Fragrance.
Thanks for correcting me and please keep on improving me in future :)
What a nice poem. Congretulations!!
I appreciate for the beautiful poem written by you. Great.
@Ashish - thx
@ Babli - I m glad :)
ahmm ahmm awesome :)
Nice one.. tell me where DO YOU GET ALL THIS.. HOW do u manage ot write so nice.. I am jealous now ...
@ Lincoln - Thanks dude :)
@ Bikram - please dont be jealous ( ;)) i m just a beginner and have started making little effort by taking inspiration from the bloggers like you...and anyway thanks for dropping by.. :)
Let her add some zest in air
by adding her stunning colors
and revitalize the aura.
The bud is yet to unfurl
Let us lend our hand to her
and facilitate
to accomplish her mission
beutiful and sweet
Beautiful lines! Very well written!
fantastiC!!!!!
Where are you? Long time no post!
@ Jyoti Ji, Sadiya and Freelance- thanks guys :)
@ Vittaldas- wud soon come up with more enthusiasm in my words :), Now a days goin so much busy :)
A simple yet beautiful poem!
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