Thursday, February 4, 2010

Cement of Affection

Sister Sister Oh my lovely sister
You are such a wonderful creature
Whenever I am low or gloomy
Your spirit is always there for me
You are strong you are intense
You give me vigor to build my confidence
Though you are far-flung from me
Yet I can caress your soul here with me
God has granted you as a pal to me
Everyone says…how lucky me
Your rapport is as fresh as dew with me
And is as deep-seated as sea
You are gorgeous, you are charming
Just your glare makes my day so pleasing
Lucky is my Jeis, he has you as his wife
Indeed your baby whose lips are curved with smile
You are benevolent and you are wise
I am blessed to have you in my life
Sister Sister Oh my superb sister
There can be no one else like you sister…
“Sister” I guess the utterance for my relationship with her is miniature. She is such an astonishing personality that whenever I have to talk about her, I am always…always short of words. 


ambiguous_angel said...

wow. that's sweet.
how i wish my brother feel the same way about me, but i doubt it.haha.
Really nice:)

shashank said...

Nice poetry Prerna
Your sister must really be proud of you..
The great bonding that you share is apparent in your choice of words.
Cheers to love :)

Tripat "Prerna" said...

thanks guys..and i m happy u liked it!
even my sis also liked it so much and forced me to put it here :)

Jagruti said...

Nice one and beautiful..:))

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

awww..that's so sweet..i always wish to have a sister..a big sister since i dont have one..

great poem i must say :3

(P.S. if you'll reply to this comment..pls. put it in my blog's comment box so that i can update my comments :D)

Tripat "Prerna" said...

@ jagruti thanks a lot
@ ayu sisters r really so sweet specially the elder ones, my elder sis is godmother to me :)

Leona said...
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Amnn.......//1! said...

flattering ur sister haan ??
kya kaam nikaal na hai ...??
loll just kiddin ....!!1
it was a nice effort for a poem ,, liked it ...!!

ज्योति सिंह said...

Nice poetry Prerna
Your sister must really be proud of you..

Harman said...

Such lovely much love n affection..
I wish all siblings are like that!!!

sleeping beauty said...

your sister is lucky enough to have you. spread love and i love you.

Leona said...

Hi :)
I gave you an award at my blog.


ambiguous_angel said...

you had been awarded.
check it out.

Tripat "Prerna" said...

@ Leona thanks a lot :)
@ ambiguous ya thanks a lot and congrats to u too :)

The Lucy and Dick Show said...

Very sweet poem. Sister's are special, aren't they?

Tripat "Prerna" said...

thanks Harman and sleeping beauty :)

Choco said...

First time here. You have a lovely blog.
Your sister will be so thrilled if she were to see this. She is very lucky to have you I am sure. :)

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

A sweet poem to show love and respect to a loving individual who she means a lot to you. Simple lines yet filled with a lot of feelings and love. Nice one.

If you have time and don't mind, read Mystical Angel. This was a poem I wrote for my friend who lost his younger sister.

Meenakshi said...

cool.. reminded me of my sister..

when I was a kid and I had just started writing poems and stuff, she was my greatest motivator. I used to ask her to give me a topic for writing a poem and she always said "My Sister".. Though I never wrote one on that.

Your poem reminded me that I owe her one.

As my sister's pet, I could imagine the feelings involved very very well..

hall be back soon with more tie in hand to read your earlier posts and to explore your blog better..


Tripat "Prerna" said...

@ Choco - Thanks for visiting and dropping by :)
@ Vittaldas - Thanks for the admiration and i read ur Mystical Angel...i really liked it :)

@Meenakshi - really greatful to have u on my blog :)
do keep on visiting :)

Leona said...

RE: Simply post like you normally do, I guess :) Or put it in your sidebar by going to "Settings", "Layout" and choosing the options there ;)

Shas said...

Nothing can beat the joy of havng a sweet sister. I wish i had one.

Tripat "Prerna" said...

Thanks Leona

Shas u r absolutely right :)

Chocolate Lover said...

awww.. sho shweet :))

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