Thursday, March 18, 2010

Dreams

When the whole world sleeps,
At the midnight air whispers in my ear.
A beautiful ball of white light in the sky,
Throws its charming rays into my eyes.
I usually try to see a glimpse of yours,
Into the mirror or in shadow of mine.
My twin eyes pretend to see you,
I am always blue without you.
I can feel and smell your senses,
As my soul is one with you.
And on all the occasions,
I want to be with you.

I Love You!

18 comments:

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

i smell the love in the air.. really sweet indeed~!! :D

and very well presented..love it ^_^

Prem Farrukhabadi said...

What a nice poem. It has really described heart felt emotions.Keep it up.Congretulations!!

pursuit of happiness said...

Hi,

Nice way of giving words to your feelings... :)I wish I could have done that :(... but only a few people are gifted ones :)...

thanks and regards,
Atul Rawat

vivek said...

Lovely , very well written Prerna...

I likes the lines " I usually try to see a glimpse of yours,
Into the mirror or in shadow of mine."



Nice to see you back Prerna , so whats going on after the hectic schedule thats somewhat over...

Leona said...

The moonlight setting is cute :)

Rajlakshmi said...

Awww That is such a romantic poem. Its lovely.

Arpit Rastogi said...

simple n sweet..
nice work done.. :)

The Lucy and Dick Show said...

You should have posted this for Valentines... but really... I'm just glad you did post it!

sleeping beauty said...

are u in love ? coz i smell love in u.hahahaha
the lines are excellent they are filled with love and search and pure as prayer of GOD.

Lincoln said...

love is in the air :P:P:P PPL can see that ;)

Bhavesh Chhatbar said...

You're quite in love seems clearly :) Who's that? :)

Meenakshi said...

sweetly and with simple words emoted a beautiful feeling.

ambiguous_angel said...

ahh..really sweet.
agree with sleeping beauty,
love is in the air:)

Tripat "Prerna" said...

Thanks u all guys...for this beautiful appreciation...and yes u all r right...m in love..
I M IN LOVE WITH ALMIGHTY, MY BELOVED..I LOVE HIM BECAUSE HE LOVES ME WITHOUT ANY EXPECTATIONS...HE IS NICE, KIND, WISE, IS ALWAYS THERE FOR ME, UNDERSTANDS ME, CARES FOR ME, ND MUCH MUCH MUCH MORE...
m short of words :)

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

Beautiful poem. It is very smooth and soothing. It is very hopeful and lovely too. The flow is so awesome that it gently touched my soul in the most positive way.

Tripat "Prerna" said...

Thanks Vittal...u surely have a high vision..ur comments always make their place deep in my thoughts...

Harman said...

nice..

S.R.Ayyangar said...

I went through your both the blogs and find that you have good grip over both the languages English and Hindi. Keep it up.