Thursday, January 28, 2010

Circlet


The more witty you are
the more distractions are there to distract you
The more optimist you are,
the more alternates are there to confuse you
The more aggressive you are,
the more problems are there to harass you
The more enthusiastic you are,
the more impatience is there to defeat you
The more gloomy you are,
the more aversions are there to get yourself hatred
The more passionate you are,
the more goals are waiting for you…

22 comments:

shashank said...

nice one Prerna..
The more you write such wonderful stuff
The more visitors you'll have..
Keep blogging
Looking forward to more from you
Cheers

shashank said...

u sure are quick 2 reply...
thanks 4 visiting thou :)

CYNOSURE said...

very well said......

and thanks for visitng me.......

Margie said...

Many thanks for the visit and nice comment!
So enjoyed this post!

Margie:)

itsyvitsy said...

Good points. The observation is marvellous here. I commend you for that. :-)

Dr. Tripat Mehta said...

thanks a lot :)

Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) said...

very nice poem Prerna... keep writting!!!

Cheers!
Tavish
Latest Blog post: To the love that once was...

Dr. Tripat Mehta said...

@ tavish Thx a lot! :)

Y said...

and i luv ur sanity :)
nyc post :)

YAM said...

this is really nice:)

Bhavesh Chhatbar said...

WOW! I follow you happily :)

Garden Lizard

Dr. Tripat Mehta said...

pleasure is completely mine :)

Shriti said...

awesome! :)
thanks for dropping by my blog :)

Dr. Tripat Mehta said...

@ ayu thanks a lot "ayu"...
i liked the template of ur blog..would u please tell me how u have added music to ur blog..its really awesome.. :)

Unknown said...

At first reading it, i feel bad about it. But then again i let my heart understands it. it gives me another thought and another great conclusion. And that being passionate is awesome. thank you for sharing this!

Oxymoron said...

if there is one thing you can be in your life.....be passionate...loved your thoughts...nice one...
and thanks for stopping by my blog...

डिम्पल मल्होत्रा said...

circlet is a nice poem by mistake i cmnt at legitimate basis.

Dr. Tripat Mehta said...

no worries..dimple...
and thanks for the comments... :)

cheers!

for the love of pictures said...

Very nice. This is a very deep - and very true - piece of poetry :)

Dr. Tripat Mehta said...

Thanks :)

ज्योति सिंह said...

Circlet


The more witty you are

the more distractions are there to distract you

The more optimist you are,

the more alternates are there to confuse you

The more aggressive you are,

the more problems are there to harass you

The more enthusiastic you are,

the more impatience is there to defeat you

The more gloomy you are,

the more aversions are there to get yourself hatred

The more passionate you are,

the more goals are waiting for you
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Dr. Tripat Mehta said...

@ Jyoti Ji arre nahi nahi bilkul nahi...aap badi hai mujhse aur tazurbekaar bhi :)